英语(二)小作文 10 分,约 100 词,考场用时 15~18 分钟。 评分先看格式与语域(是不是这类信、语气对不对),再看要点是否齐全,最后才看语言。 三个要点少写一个,扣分比语法错误重得多。
通用骨架
Dear Sir or Madam, / Dear Mr. Smith, / Dear friends,
← 顶格,逗号结尾,另起一行空 4 个字母缩进
第 1 段 自我介绍 + 写信目的 (1~2 句)
第 2 段 展开要点,题干给几条写几条 (3~4 句,主体)
第 3 段 期待回复 / 再次致意 (1~2 句)
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
格式红线
- 署名固定为 Li Ming,除非题目另有指定;绝不能写自己的真实姓名。
- 不写地址、不写日期——考研书信不需要,写了浪费字数。
- 收信人不明用
Dear Sir or Madam,;面向群体用Dear friends,/Dear fellow students,; 知道姓氏用Dear Mr./Ms. + 姓(不加名)。 - 落款:正式用
Yours sincerely,,写给不认识的人也可用Yours faithfully,;朋友间用Best regards,。 - 三段之间空行或缩进统一,全篇只用一种。
第一段:起手句(按目的选一句)
| 目的 | 句子 |
|---|---|
| 通用自我介绍 | I am writing to you in my capacity as the chairman of the Students' Union. |
| 提建议 | I am writing to offer some suggestions concerning ... |
| 发邀请 | I am writing to cordially invite you to ... |
| 道歉 | I am writing to express my sincere apology for ... |
| 感谢 | I am writing to extend my heartfelt gratitude for ... |
| 投诉 | I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with ... |
| 申请/求职 | I am writing to apply for the position of ... advertised on ... |
| 咨询 | I am writing to request further information about ... |
第二段:七类信件的展开句
建议信
- To begin with, it would be advisable for you to ...
- In addition, I would recommend that you (should) ...
- Above all, what really counts is that ...
邀请信
- The event is scheduled for 3 p.m. on Saturday, June 8, at the Main Hall.
- It would be a great honour if you could deliver a speech on ...
- We would be delighted if you could join us.
道歉信
- I am afraid that I will not be able to ... as previously arranged, because ...
- Please accept my apology for any inconvenience caused.
- To make up for it, I would like to ... at your convenience.
感谢信
- I truly appreciate the help you offered when I was ...
- But for your generous assistance, I could hardly have ...
- I do hope I will have the opportunity to return your kindness.
投诉信
- The product I purchased on May 3 turned out to be defective in the following aspects.
- To make matters worse, the after-sales service failed to respond to my repeated requests.
- I would appreciate it if you could give me a refund (or a replacement) within a week.
申请/求职信
- I graduated from ... University, majoring in ..., and have three years of experience in ...
- I believe my background in ... qualifies me for this position.
- Enclosed is my resume, and I would welcome the chance of an interview.
通知与告示
通知不用书信格式,用标题居中 + 正文 + 落款单位:
Notice
← 标题居中,首字母大写
正文:什么活动、时间、地点、面向谁、如何报名(3~4 句)
The Students' Union
June 1, 2026
- An English speech contest will be held in the Main Hall at 2 p.m. on Friday, June 12.
- All undergraduates who are interested are welcome to sign up.
- Those who wish to participate should register at the Students' Union office before June 5.
- For further information, feel free to contact me at 1234567.
第三段:收尾句(按语气选一句)
| 语气 | 句子 |
|---|---|
| 通用 | I am looking forward to your early reply. |
| 建议 | I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. |
| 邀请 | We would very much appreciate your presence. |
| 道歉 | Once again, I am sorry for the trouble I have caused. |
| 感谢 | Thank you again for your kindness and support. |
| 投诉 | I trust you will take my complaint seriously and settle it properly. |
| 申请 | Thank you for your time and consideration. |
三个提分点
- 要点对齐题干:题干中文提示有几条(如「说明原因、提出建议、表示感谢」), 第二段就写几句,一条一句,宁可直白也不要漏。
- 换掉最俗的词:
very good→remarkable;I think→From my perspective;a lot of→a considerable number of。全篇换 3~4 处即可,不必句句求难。 - 长短句交替:连写两句长句后接一个短句,比通篇从句更耐读,也更不容易出错。